So today we’re continuing our dialogue series! Today is Realization.
What is realization in a story?
It’s when the character realizes something, figures out something. When something ‘clicks’, ‘falls into place’, or a puzzle piece’s place is found. Often times, a character is thinking about it in their head.
But sometimes, it’s out loud.
Take Harry Potter for example. (Don’t read on to the following examples if you haven’t read the whole series)
In book 2, Harry realized it was Moaning Myrtle while talking with Ron, out loud. And in the last book, when he came back to life, he was saying out loud to Voldemort what he’d realized.
Reading a character talking out loud about their realizations is way more interesting than just them thinking. You can say how they’re doing it, with adjectives and stuff. (Excitedly, slowly, eyes twinkling, gasped, etc.)
Overall, Realization is actually really easy to write. Which is why this post is so short.
I’ve just realized (bad pun, I know 😂) that most of my posts on dialogue are short. Maybe that just goes to prove how easy it is? 😉
The Triad of Caosdif
Don’t ask me how to pronounce the above, because I made up the last word by typing random letters. 😂 Say it like it looks, I guess.
But anyway, that is the story I’m currently rewriting. (Or have been intending to… I may or may not have gotten only a few sentences done over the past week? *nervous laughter*)
I’m switching the names of all the main characters in this second draft, and so sometimes I still catch myself writing their old ones. Oopsie.
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